By: yeebarr
Work has my nuts in a vice and doesn’t plan on letting go anytime soon, so I haven’t had much time to read much of anything. So far only read 42 pages of SMRML – I must say it’s funnier than I...
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I was intrigued by NBTT. It definitely feels like a screenplay with the descriptions (nice writing style) etc… but I think the fatal flaw is quite apparent. A criminal goes out of his way to strap a...
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In reply to 3waystopsign. Like all comedies it’s obviously an exaggeration. The reason the experience is not like yours… your life would make a boring movie (mine too). Did you watch Dumb and Dumber...
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SMRML I thought the female characters here were one of its weakest points. The conclusion the screenplay ultimately seems to come to is “bros before hos” and that women, are essentially heinous,...
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Did you actually watch Wedding Crashers? It opens with the lead character checking out a secretary’s ass and them planning to crash weddings right off the bat after he sits in on a bitter divorce...
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In reply to <a href="http://scriptshadow.net/amateur-offerings-weekend/#comment-228789">Colenicks83</a>. So, every script should follow that same plot/style and build slowly? Where's the...
View ArticleBy: HawaiianOrganDonor
In reply to <a href="http://scriptshadow.net/amateur-offerings-weekend/#comment-18420">Ella-een</a>. Yes, The Last Bash is a Writers Store competitor from the Allen Loeb round two years...
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In reply to august4. Actually no, the “crew” is four guys: Brent, Cam, Nick and Sherman. I submitted to the Allen Loeb logline contest as well and like you, went with four guys. However, I gave each...
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In reply to JTLaw. When did I say you shouldn’t do bachelor party movies? And way to prove my point. The second one sucked because it failed to beat the original. That is what I was saying. He knows...
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In reply to <a href="http://scriptshadow.net/amateur-offerings-weekend/#comment-18590">europa</a>. Incorrect? The father and daughter have one exchange of dialogue, two lines, before the...
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